on these shores, my distant listener
days are frightening hot and blue
birds stopped singing amongst the green
winds strike sail in silent dispersion
unmerciful lights fall from above
sliding the walls, calcifying the stones
in this land, my missed lover
there are unframed landscapes
where no shadow of life exists
except for a soft lulled cadence
filling the emptied of breath streets
telling the world I am incomplete
the entire poem is beautiful, but these lines:
“a soft lulled cadence
filling the emptied of breath streets”
sort of melter my knees…
wonderful post!
It’s such a soft, gentle piece of writing. I really liked it. Your emotion really shines through.
This is hauntingly beautiful !
the imagery is stunning…
love your style.
smiles.
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beautiful thoughts and imagery in your poetry 🙂 very nicely written..
Vinay @ I Rhyme Without Reason
I like this a lot!
Lovely poem on loss, permeated by a breathing landscape.
Good in two stanza, enjoyed reading!
Your poetry sings…I enjoyed this!
“telling the world I am incomplete”
brilliant
Thanks for visits and comments. I like the idea of someone describing space (and feelings) to a distant someone, but I suppose this is a poem to be worked in the near future. Many thanks, anyway.
Hi Seabell, this is such a beautifull poem, like a song, a tribute to a wonderfull place on this earth. 🙂